The Comet

Enero 3, 2008 at 9:34 umaga | In Poetry | 15 Comments

Looking up at the night sky alone, I saw a comet
Though it appeared and vanished in a second
When I think of you, my chest begins to hurt
I want to see you right now, but I can’t fly through the sky

If perchance I could have become a comet
I would go flying through the sky
No matter what kind of tomorrow comes, this thought is strong
So my comet is unbreakable

If per chance I could have become a comet
I would always spill my overflowing light
As you look at the night sky when you’re sad
I want to sparkle more so that you will smile

You are always fighting something by yourself
Being by your side is all I can do

If per chance I could have become a comet
I would go flying thorugh the sky, surely
I would definitely reach you, with this single moment of light
Lighting up your present and passing through the sky
If I could have become a comet
I would surely stay by your side, at any time

–

PS: If you have any other type of comets in mind, kindly post it here. It’s been a while since I posted my last blog entry, I’m super busy with my work kasi. Please forgive me. ^_^

Mga Puna »

RSS ulat para sa mga puna sa paskil na ito. BakasPabalik URI

  1. just wanted to say hi. nice post re the comet. thanks nga pala for dropping by my blog:)

    foo: no problem. ^_^ teka, nasaktan ka ba sa pag drop mo sa blog ko? heheheee

    Comment ni ladyracer — Enero 4, 2008 #

    Tugon

  2. hehe. are you a poet, an astronomer, or astrologer?
    salamat sa pagbisita at pagkumento sa blog ko. ;)

    foo: err… isa lamang po akong simpleng tao na nakikihalubilo sa mga kakaibang tao. ^^ ikaw?

    Comment ni homebodyhubby — Enero 4, 2008 #

    Tugon

  3. hi foo, happy new year! i would love to witness another shower of stars :D

    foo: wow, nice punchline. ^^ so kamusta love life? ^^

    Comment ni kengkay — Enero 4, 2008 #

    Tugon

  4. uy nagjoke sya :) medyo corny pero thanks for the effort. sounds like a pick-up line kase hehe

    foo: hehe, di naman malutong yung corny dahil sa effot… oops, effort pala, hyuwahh

    Comment ni ladyracer — Enero 4, 2008 #

    Tugon

  5. nice poetry, di ko madugtungan kasi wala akong talent sa ganyan hehe…

    Happy new year Foo! ;)

    foo: hehe, iba ata ang talent ko na to. naku po… kung alam mo lang… ^^

    Comment ni MisyeL — Enero 5, 2008 #

    Tugon

  6. hehe. simpleng tao lang din ako. pero MAS gusto kong nakikihalubilo sa mga simpleng (hindi kakaibang) tao din… paris mo. :) salamat uli dun sa comment mo sa blog ko. ;)

    foo: huwahh! salamat naman at nauunawaan mo ang mga simpleng nakasulat dito. ^^ kakaiba talaga ang mga fellow bloggers ko. ^^

    Comment ni homebodyhubby — Enero 5, 2008 #

    Tugon

  7. and if perchance u hv bcme a comet,
    cud u b my vry own wishin’ star?
    granting my wishes from afar

    a star falling from the sky
    can’t keep u no matter how hard i try
    of ice and dust u glimmer
    ur lyt shines not 4ever

    and in one short glimpse,
    shining bryt
    oh what a lovely syt
    on a cold lonely nyt

    a fleeting story
    of a heavenly beauty
    wil 4ver stay in my memory

    (my kind of comet 4 u :D )

    foo: kung babae ka, ma i inlove siguro ako sayo. kung lalake ka, maraming ma i inlove sayo. ^_^ tama ba mga tsong at tsang?

    Comment ni koreanmine — Enero 5, 2008 #

    Tugon

  8. wow galing naman :) di ko kaya yan! aheheh keepitipup! ;)

    foo: kaya mo yan, naniniwala ako sayo. ^_^ ikaw, naniniwala ka rin ba sa sarili mo? :p

    Comment ni lilmiz — Enero 6, 2008 #

    Tugon

  9. You surely will shine as a comet. I’ve never seen one, but I look forward to seeing oneday soon.

    foo: thanks leah. it’s been a while since I last posted my entry so I think I will leave the shining thingy to my fellow bloggers here. ^^ but i do believe that you will shine more brightly than me because you’re sweet. ^^

    Comment ni Leah — Enero 7, 2008 #

    Tugon

  10. wow isa k plang mkata.. wag k mag-alala gagawi rin ako ng comet ko..

    foo: huwahh! isa kang alamat pag nakagawa ka ng sarili mong comet! bawal gumamit ng photoshop ha. ^^

    Comment ni repah — Enero 8, 2008 #

    Tugon

  11. kung tagalog sana madali kong dudugtungan
    XD nice poem :D

    foo: hmm… eh di dugtungan mo sa tagalog. ^^ pwede naman diba? may ice cream ka sa akin pag nakagawa ka. ^^

    Comment ni wewillgetbywithasmile — Enero 8, 2008 #

    Tugon

  12. Di pipigilan, muling susulyapan
    Wala nang ibang magawa kundi tumingin sa kawalan
    Sa papamamagitan na sariling paninikap
    Siyang nakamtan

    foo:Ngunit saan ka pupunta? Saan ka lilisan?
    Kung hindi ka lilingon, saan aasa?
    Dito na lang ba, sa dulo ng kawalan?
    O doon sa dulo, na tila walang hanggan?

    *foo bigay ice cream kay kuhkuhbear* wahehehe!

    Comment ni wewillgetbywithasmile — Enero 10, 2008 #

    Tugon

  13. psssttt babae (daw ako :D ) ahihi ;) ) ;)

    foo: wahh! ganun? makagawa nga ng love letter… ^_^

    Comment ni koreanmine — Enero 10, 2008 #

    Tugon

  14. hmmm… I miss stargazing… might do that tonight with the almost regular perfect night sky here Down Under! ;)

    foo: down under? whoahh… lalim nun ah. ^^ *bulong* ano meron dun? ^^

    Comment ni Jim — Enero 10, 2008 #

    Tugon

  15. hmmm. mahilig ka sa tanong :P
    hahaha! pwede matigil ang mundo :P

    foo: yan lang naman ang pwede kong ibayad sa pagbisita nyo, ang matanong pabalik, diba? ^^ teka nga, panu ko matitigil ang mundo? ^^

    Comment ni wewillgetbywithasmile — Enero 12, 2008 #

    Tugon

Mag-iwan ng puna

XHTML: <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <pre> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <strike> <strong>

Sumulat ng Blog sa WordPress.com. | Theme: Pool by Borja Fernandez.
Entries and comments feeds.